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Residue by ~iuvixra:iconiuvixra:


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Submitted: February 21, 2005
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There is much meaning i this work. I'd like to say it's some bitter representation of myself.. With flaws, and perfections.. but at the same time, it's everything I could never want to be. Can you see it? does it even matter?

The hourglass has broken
The seconds without voices cease their ticking
and the morose darkness is eternal
In a land without time
Decayed on a frozen breeze
Edging past the clock tower and
....you can't save me
When silence is deafening
My parody
Your double life
A disease of reality that never was
Can you feel it?
Wind breathing on your neck
Perfumed with alchohol
Lacking a savior
Unless lost sobriety might be the antidote
Lost in oneself so unbeknownst
And the voices of yesterday
Are ever muted
Or are you just pretending
But you know
You've seen
and the screams are still there
in your rotten soul
ever searching for a light
That burnt out long ago
for within you
Time has staggered
Dear, in this age...
when i whisper to you
things didn't change.
and still they are just
In your stuppor..
have you forgotten?

That, my friends, is meant to be confusing. For this piece alone.. I discourage critique..

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*PeaceOut:iconPeaceOut: Feb 21, 2005, 2:03:42 AM
woooooooooooooooooooooooo!! i love it!! :+fav: the poem is magic!! and the blood!! and the rose!

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:bucktooth::gun::shithitsthefan:
You non-conformists are all alike
~iuvixra:iconiuvixra: Feb 21, 2005, 2:13:03 AM
That's sweet. I'm touched by the responce. And thank you for the fav^^

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Watch me bleed.
*PeaceOut:iconPeaceOut: Feb 21, 2005, 2:21:01 AM
your welcome, it's really good!!

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:bucktooth::gun::shithitsthefan:
You non-conformists are all alike
~iuvixra:iconiuvixra: Feb 21, 2005, 2:22:35 AM
Just a fragment of my mind, I suppose. and your pictures are lovely.. I intend to go to sleep for the moment.. But I'd like to browse the rest of your gallery upon returning^^

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Watch me bleed.
*PeaceOut:iconPeaceOut: Feb 21, 2005, 2:25:16 AM
awww :') thank you!!

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:bucktooth::gun::shithitsthefan:
You non-conformists are all alike
~iuvixra:iconiuvixra: Feb 21, 2005, 2:26:14 AM
No need for thanks^^ And have a nice time, hm? *nowtoddlesofftogotosleep*

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Watch me bleed.
~Ralukita:iconRalukita: Feb 21, 2005, 6:48:18 AM
It's wonderful...I love it!! The poem also matches the drawing and i guess they both match your personality... You're a goth, am i right? :(
It's beautiful, anyway.. I mean it.
~kurenaiXseito:iconkurenaiXseito: Feb 21, 2005, 9:06:56 AM
You, my friend, have a wonderful gift. I must say, this is stunning work! (At least to me! And we all know that the world revolves around you and me, yes? XD) ^_^ I'm so proud of you!

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I will take the sun in my mouth
and leap into the ripe air alive
with closed eyes
to dash against darkness
~harimauputeh:iconharimauputeh: Feb 21, 2005, 9:17:26 AM
Very beautiful rose and I love the effect you gave on the heart. And, yes, the blood is a very nice effect!
~SarcasticxPoetess:iconSarcasticxPoetess: Feb 21, 2005, 10:58:06 AM
I'd just like to say, before I begin...

Ralukita, please do not use labels on my friends. It's demeaning, and there is a lot more to someone than their "position" in life, get what I mean?

Anywaysssss....

Jess, this is brilliant. So freakin' brilliant, I have nothing else really to say, except I'd like to think I understand, except...that may be just too selfish of me to think.

The poem really gets to your real feelings, something I try to emulate, and come up short. It's great that you have a good sense of self and you can put your thoughts on paper.

And the picture...ah, well, it's lovely. I couldn't ever do anything like it. Original, beautiful..and all around...

Charming, in a demented sort of way.

Much loveh. -favsit- If I remembered how...Wow, I slept late.

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[if it looks like i'm laughing, i'm really just asking to leave this alone.]